Thread:StoryGirl83/@comment-5833545-20130124173103/@comment-3452092-20130126050214

Not quite what I was thinking you were doing, but it looks good. It's just huge. If you can make it collapsible so that it defaults to being collapsed and only the title piece shows unless you uncollapse it, I think it would work better. And the writing is a little difficult to read in the main part, because it is so close to the color of the background, maybe a pale violet? Other than that it looks good and I love the image choices you came up with.