Thread:StoryGirl83/@comment-5833545-20130202232246/@comment-3452092-20130203001250

The first thing you need to do is reread the rules, since you don't seem to know them yet. After that, what you need to do is the same thing as before, The Charmed Ones page. You need to get rid of any bolding that isn't for centered section titles. You need to clean up you links. A lot of the red links on that page actually have pages, so you need to find the correct names for those pages and put those in instead of what is there. Get rid of any links to things that aren't at least mentioned in the comics. Is the Triad mentioned in The Sourcebook? If it's not unlink that and just leave plain text there. If it is, leave it as is.

Fix the infobox template for that page. While it isn't giving me a headache like it was before, the colors are still way to bright. Make sure to make it collapsible. There are several examples of collapsible templates on this site. If you plan on making templates for this site, you had better learn how to make your templates collapsible. You also need to make it bigger since the templates for this site are supposed to be 300px including the images on them. I'd change the template name too, since Charmed Ones is decidely not a species, but that's not an immediate concern.

You need to change you images on the page so that they do not include the added by part.

Amazingly, you actually need more info on the events involving the Charmed Ones on the show. All I saw was info on season eight. I may have missed additional information, because I only did a quick look through. I've mostly been trying to figure out how to make your character template collapsible without loosing lines or other basic structure. From what I recall, the section on season eight is too long, but you need to have a highlights of the other seven seasons. You don't need to make sure you have something from every season, just make sure you find major events and sum them up. Don't deal too much in the details, we are just trying to get a good overview of the series in connection with events dealing with all three sister (whichever set) as a group working together magically. Remember, in your own words only.

There's probably more, but those are the things that stuck out. There are also probably things that are very good, such as the infobox with the girls and the powers that I already mentioned I liked. Right now, though I am trying to give you things that need to be fixed, because you need to get this page to the point where it is acceptable.